Conclusion:
From the feedback I will be able to improve both the look and the style of the magazine as well as incorporating what people think of the magazine. i will then edit and change the various parts of the magazine so that the magazine will appeal to more of my target audience.
Strengths:
One of the main strengths was that the magazine had a followable recipe inside which would allow the audience to follow the recipe. The target audience really liked this and they said that this was a unique part compared to other magazines in the same genre.
Weaknesses:
One of the main weaknesses of the ages was that the pages needed both more text and needed to have a stronger house style throughout all of the pages. They have also said that I should add more banners to the top of the pages to provide a more recognisable tyle to the top of each page.
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